The Corner

The rewrite stuff

A couple of posts down, I wrote:

Jonah writes today about the reluctance of journalists (a profession that congratulates itself on its “bravery” and “courage” far more than, say, firemen do)

A reader quite likes the line but suggests an improvement: 

Jonah writes today about the reluctance of journalists (a profession that congratulates itself on its “bravery” and “courage” far more than, say, Chesley Sullenberger does)…

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